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The Waters Next
You should fly the waters next -
I’ve laid them out for you like
clothes in the morning. Jump
the window and fly -
                    the delta opens out to
seven-sailing lovers in an archipelago
of silences. What you adore – what we
adore together, the move from land to land -
is freer there. And no passport
                                                opens or closes
the sluice between this-one-a-laughter, this-one-
devoted-to-small-things. You should fly
         because they let you in for the swell
in your breast, your tales and whether
you tell them with your eyes.
          Or what covers the earth is wasted, love.
          And we grew these wings.

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December 22, 2006 at 1:18 pm
davidbdale
That’s very sweet and evocative. I like the mix of tones from casual by day to arabian nights. I like the swell of breast and how it echoes swollen water and the shape of the lines like a wave. Very pretty.
December 23, 2006 at 6:51 am
blaspheme
Love it Kyla – its evocative and seamlessly structured. Excellent stuff – I’m a fan.
December 24, 2006 at 4:11 pm
kyla
Thank you, gentlemen. I was feeling sort of iffy about it, but now not so much.
David: thanks for dropping by. Random visitors are always welcome! Arabian nights, huh? Wouldn’t have thought it, but what do I know!
December 24, 2006 at 9:34 pm
nabihameher
simply brilliant kyla. reminds me of ani difranco for some reason. i’m not even much of a poetry fan but i really loved this piece.
December 26, 2006 at 7:13 am
nida7
your poem left me with a strong feeling of serenity, of people/stories blossoming and moving, an organic feeling of being “one with the earth”. that sounds cheesy, i know, but that’s the truth.
and “sluice” – what a great word!
December 26, 2006 at 11:24 am
kyla
Nabiha: big Ani fan I am so not surprising and very flattering.
Nida: big fan of “sluice” I am so… yeah. Also, “organic” is another favourite.
Thank you for all the niceness.
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