Comments on: Direction http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/ such as it is Fri, 06 Mar 2009 04:59:02 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: nabihameher http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-27 nabihameher Wed, 03 Jan 2007 19:03:58 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-27 the commas got to go! i like this piece. the last line reminds me of pablo neruda's poem poetry: And it was at that age... Poetry arrived in search of me... i'm glad you guys are posting poetry... i didn't realise i've been missing it! the commas got to go!

i like this piece. the last line reminds me of pablo neruda’s poem poetry:

And it was at that age… Poetry arrived
in search of me…

i’m glad you guys are posting poetry… i didn’t realise i’ve been missing it!

]]> By: blaspheme http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-26 blaspheme Wed, 03 Jan 2007 06:32:58 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-26 whats that again? whats that again?

]]> By: halfwords http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-25 halfwords Tue, 02 Jan 2007 15:50:37 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-25 On an unrelated note, James Baldwin is a writer. Idiot. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_Baldwin_(writer) On an unrelated note, James Baldwin is a writer. Idiot.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_Baldwin_(writer)

]]> By: blaspheme http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-21 blaspheme Tue, 26 Dec 2006 10:06:36 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-21 Having consulted my notes i can assure you that the typo comma is indeed a rebellious rogue element that must be destroyed. However, given my penchant for inappropriate and accidental punctuation and the fact that this comma is now possibly one of the most famous/infamous commas (very few commas in history have received any recognition at all for their work you see) to grace the virtual page - i shall leave it there to irk the idle reader. The comments are most flattering - thungu! Having consulted my notes i can assure you that the typo comma is indeed a rebellious rogue element that must be destroyed. However, given my penchant for inappropriate and accidental punctuation and the fact that this comma is now possibly one of the most famous/infamous commas (very few commas in history have received any recognition at all for their work you see) to grace the virtual page – i shall leave it there to irk the idle reader.
The comments are most flattering – thungu!

]]> By: nida7 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-19 nida7 Tue, 26 Dec 2006 06:55:32 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-19 i really enjoyed this poem, too. i agree with kyla about losing the comma in the first line. i loved the line: "don’t falter, or pause to see all the amber turn red." there's so much meaning packed into those few words, as well as the fact that it's a lovely visual. i really enjoyed this poem, too. i agree with kyla about losing the comma in the first line. i loved the line: “don’t falter, or pause to see all the amber turn red.” there’s so much meaning packed into those few words, as well as the fact that it’s a lovely visual.

]]> By: kyla http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-16 kyla Sun, 24 Dec 2006 16:06:02 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-16 I can see why you're fond of it. It's really lovely. My favourite bit is the transition into "Take the first right, she said." It's just really nicely done. The first line asked me to ask you to lose the comma. Though I might have hallucinated that part. I can see why you’re fond of it. It’s really lovely. My favourite bit is the transition into “Take the first right, she said.” It’s just really nicely done.

The first line asked me to ask you to lose the comma. Though I might have hallucinated that part.

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