Comments for Ramblers' Guild http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com such as it is Fri, 06 Mar 2009 04:59:02 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 Comment on The Waters Next by maxx-jg http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/22/the-waters-next/#comment-1442 maxx-jg Fri, 06 Mar 2009 04:59:02 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/22/the-waters-next/#comment-1442 аська телефон бесплатно мэнаус река colibry im скачать бесплатно порно ролик анал xbox 360

]]> Comment on The Waters Next by jartFaksshata http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/22/the-waters-next/#comment-1434 jartFaksshata Sun, 02 Nov 2008 07:03:25 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/22/the-waters-next/#comment-1434 Eh.. What do you think of my stupid lemon A joke for you peoples! Why do bees have sticky hair? Because they use honeycombs!! Eh.. What do you think of my stupid lemon A joke for you peoples! Why do bees have sticky hair? Because they use honeycombs!!

]]> Comment on The Guild by salaina http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com#comment-1431 salaina Sun, 28 Sep 2008 06:19:25 +0000 #comment-1431 http://www.new.facebook.com/group.php?gid=36801764415&ref=ts Any of you feel like joining up and are upto being published please have a look at the above.. cheers! http://www.new.facebook.com/group.php?gid=36801764415&ref=ts
Any of you feel like joining up and are upto being published please have a look at the above..

cheers!

]]> Comment on The Concert by nabihameher http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-188 nabihameher Sun, 24 Jun 2007 08:30:53 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-188 I mean the climax of the story: the very last part when he comes home and has his epiphany or moment of realization. I was left wondering how he managed to reconcile his strong aversion to his mother's sexuality so abruptly, but it works. Perhaps you should voice his thoughts while he's driving home instead of just jumping straight to the ending? I mean the climax of the story: the very last part when he comes home and has his epiphany or moment of realization. I was left wondering how he managed to reconcile his strong aversion to his mother’s sexuality so abruptly, but it works. Perhaps you should voice his thoughts while he’s driving home instead of just jumping straight to the ending?

]]> Comment on The Concert by nida7 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-187 nida7 Sun, 24 Jun 2007 06:29:07 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-187 thanks, nabiha! i really appreciate your comments. i think i'm in shock that someone contributed to the guild after so long! by the way, when you say climax, do you mean his sexual climax? should that scene be fleshed out further? just trying to get a sense of how to make it better. thanks, nabiha! i really appreciate your comments. i think i’m in shock that someone contributed to the guild after so long! by the way, when you say climax, do you mean his sexual climax? should that scene be fleshed out further? just trying to get a sense of how to make it better.

]]> Comment on The Concert by nabihameher http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-185 nabihameher Sat, 23 Jun 2007 09:44:49 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-185 Nida, the climax is abrupt. The point of denouement is well foreshadowed, and I really like it. However, I wonder what the mother's story is now? All in all it's a good story which comes full circle, and I really liked the parts where the insight into the relationship between sexuality and power are expressed through Tahir. Hope this helps! Nida, the climax is abrupt. The point of denouement is well foreshadowed, and I really like it. However, I wonder what the mother’s story is now?
All in all it’s a good story which comes full circle, and I really liked the parts where the insight into the relationship between sexuality and power are expressed through Tahir. Hope this helps!

]]> Comment on 2695 by kabababrubarta http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/16/2695/#comment-95 kabababrubarta Mon, 26 Mar 2007 23:38:18 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/16/2695/#comment-95 Good site! kabababrubarta Good site! kabababrubarta

]]> Comment on Exercise: Ten Words by 3amcomics http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/27/exercise-ten-words/#comment-33 3amcomics Sun, 11 Feb 2007 18:58:00 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/27/exercise-ten-words/#comment-33 a toughie. Interesting. a toughie. Interesting.

]]> Comment on The Concert by nida7 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-32 nida7 Thu, 08 Feb 2007 08:12:12 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2007/02/08/the-concert/#comment-32 sorry, i tried creating larger spaces to indicate section breaks, but it posted like this. hope you'll be able to figure it out. sorry, i tried creating larger spaces to indicate section breaks, but it posted like this. hope you’ll be able to figure it out.

]]> Comment on Direction by nabihameher http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-27 nabihameher Wed, 03 Jan 2007 19:03:58 +0000 http://ramblersguild.wordpress.com/2006/12/23/direction/#comment-27 the commas got to go! i like this piece. the last line reminds me of pablo neruda's poem poetry: And it was at that age... Poetry arrived in search of me... i'm glad you guys are posting poetry... i didn't realise i've been missing it! the commas got to go!

i like this piece. the last line reminds me of pablo neruda’s poem poetry:

And it was at that age… Poetry arrived
in search of me…

i’m glad you guys are posting poetry… i didn’t realise i’ve been missing it!

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